Types of Rock

1/4/2012

5 Comments

 
Hey viewers,
Please leave a comment or positive feedback about my Types of Rocks section (which includes igneous, sedimentary and metamorphic rock). Please keep in mind spelling, punctuation, grammar, capitals, media and additional information. Thank you :)
-Cleopatra
5 Comments
Oreo
1/4/2012 11:02:53 am

Igneous rock
Spelling: I didn't see any spelling errors when I read over it.
Grammer: you have one sentence that has a grammer mistake, you have done really good.
Information: you have good information but it could use more.
Sedimentary rock
Spelling: you have a few spelling mistakes not many tho.
Grammer: when I read over it it looked good I didn't see any mistakes.
Information: I liked your information, I think it was really good.
Media: I like the picture.
Metamorphic
Spelling: I didn't see any spelling errors on this page
Grammer: I saw a few grammer mistakes not many tho.
Media: it was a great picture I liked it.
Information: you need way more information besides that it looks great. :)

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Joe Joltz
1/4/2012 12:05:58 pm

Igneous Rocks-

Grammar:
I didn't see any grammar mistakes besides a missing 's' on the word cool.

Information:
You don't have very much information it's just spread out over a large area.

Capitals:
I didn't see any capital errors.

Spelling:

You spelled surface wrong.

Punctuation:
Remember to put put spaces after your commas.

Media:
Really good pictures although, you could add a video


Sedimentary Rock-

Grammar:
I wasn't able to find any grammar errors.

Information:
All of your information was relevant and very good.

Capitals:
I couldn't find any capitalization errors.

Spelling:
I didn't see anything spelled incorrectly.

Punctuation:
You have some unnecessary periods are missing spaces after some as well.

Media:
Your pictures are really good although, maybe you could add a video? Also make all your font the same size.

Metamorphic Rock-

Grammar:
I didn't see any grammar mistakes.

Information:
You don't have enough information and there is tons more that you could ad by looking at the slide shows and your notes.

Capitals:
No capital errors.

Spelling:
All of your spelling was correct.

Punctuation:
I didn't see any punctuation errors.

Media:
Good picture but you could add a video.

Good Work! :)

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Amy
1/4/2012 01:40:50 pm

Igneous Rocks-

Grammar:
I didn't see any grammar mistakes.
Information:
You could add some more information.
Capitals:
I didn't see any capital errors.
Spelling:
You spelled one word wrong which is surface.
Punctuation:
I did not see a punctuation error on your work.
Media:
I liked your pictures for the page.


Sedimentary Rock-

Grammar:
I wasn't able to find any grammar errors on your page.
Information:
I really liked your information on this page.
Capitals:
I couldn't find any capitals missing or in the wrong place
Spelling:
You spelled sedimentary rock everytime you used it.
Punctuation:
You had excelent punctuation that is what I think
Media:
Your pictures are wonderful and I liked them.

Metamorphic Rock-

Grammar:
I didn't see any grammar mistakes on your work.
Information:
You don't have enough information on this page so you need to add more.
Capitals:
You have no capalization errors.
Spelling:
There was no spelling mistakes that I saw.
Punctuation:
I didn't see any punctuation errors on this page.
Media:
i really liked your picture.

Keep up the amazing work :D

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Amy
1/4/2012 01:50:51 pm

Sedimentary Rock
Spelling Correction:
You spelled sedimentary wrong everytime you used it .
Punctuation:
You had excellent punctuation that is what I think.

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Ms. Bohnert
6/12/2012 05:20:45 am

Great work overall, however you did have a few spelling mistakes. You have to make sure to read your material several times before posting it- your information is great thought! Keep up the good work and the editing ;-)

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