The Theory of Plate Tectonics Peer Review

12/14/2011

5 Comments

 
Hey viewers,
If any of you have comments or suggestions for my  "Theory of Plate Tectonics" section (crust, mantle, outer core, inner core) please let me know.  Keep in mind spelling, grammar, punctuation, aditional info, etc. Thanks viewers.
-Cleopatra
5 Comments
Mr. Hong
12/14/2011 01:43:10 pm

I recommend removing all the google.ca/images links that you have provided and use the actual websites where the images are located. This will make your website look better because right now, the links are stretching across the entire page so you have to scroll all the way across to read everything.

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Joe Joltz
12/14/2011 01:56:06 pm

I think you named this post incorrectly. :P

Crust:
- I understand that you put the time frame of when the info for the crust is but it could be better if you found a specific video. I recommend braingenie on Youtube.
- I saw the large source and relized that it was the google images URL so remember you have to go to full size image.
- The first comma that you put could be a period or you could make it a compound sentence.
- Try to get an image specific to the crust.
- I like how you said that the crust is made of igneous, sedimentary, and metamorphic rock because I haven't seen many sites that say that.

Mantle:
- You could add a little bit more info since there was a lot we went over in class and a lot on sites like wikipedia.
- I understand how that picture you have shows the four layers of the mantle although try to find one that shows the four layers but is only about the mantle.
- I like how you added the picture gallery and how you said all four layers of the mantle because I never new that there were four layers.

Outer Core:
- As I said in crust I understand the time frame but try to find a specific one.
- Try to find a specific picture.
- I like how you gave more detail in brackets.

Inner Core:
- I don't really like the picture how it's zoomed in so far.
- The font size isn't the same as other pages.
- Again, you have a google images URL.
- Video, same as I've already repeated.
- I like how you said that the inner core is the furthest layer from the crust while you started at crust with it is the furthest layer from the inner core.

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Amy
12/14/2011 02:23:20 pm

Crust
- You could add more information
- fabulous job

Mantle
- The website where you got the stuff could be on a different page
- overall wonderful job

Outer Core
-You could get a more relevant picture for the outer core
-keep up the great work

Inner Core
- It needs some more information
- great job overall

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Oreo
12/14/2011 10:11:39 pm

Crust
- spelling error
- great info
Mantle
- more info
- great work
Inner core
- grammar
- good job
Outer core
- coukd use more info

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Goda
12/15/2011 01:21:43 am

Crust:
-You need better picture for crust and better video
-You don’t need the address for your picture
-You have great info and I like how you use the point form
-Great job

Mantle:
- Again better picture for mantle
- I think you need more info
- You don’t need the address for picture and video
- Great job

Outer Core:
- Better picture and video again
- Great info
- Again you don’t need the address for picture and video
- Great job

Inner Core:
- I think the size of the word is different so it look better
- Again you don’t need to address for video
- Great info and picture
- Great job

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