The 6 Characteristics of Minerals Peer Feedback

12/15/2011

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Hey viewers,
Feel free to post any comments or suggestions you have on the information of my 6 Characteristics of Minerals section. Thanks viewers.
-Cleopatra
4 Comments
Joe Joltz
12/15/2011 10:38:27 am

Though most of them have basic information, I d notice that you could include much more. Just review the slideshow and I'm sure you could find tons more information. Also on the cleavage and fracture part I believe you spelled smooth wrong so just look over that. Another thing is that you forgot to put periods at the end of a few. Other than that it's looking great. :)

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Oreo
12/15/2011 10:45:08 am

Lustre
- Spelling errors
- Great info
- Punctuation
Hardness
- Grammer good
- Could use more info
Crystal Structure
- Grammer
- Great info
- More info
- Punctuation
Colour
- Need's picture
- More info
- Punctuation
Streak
- Punctuation
- More info
- Picture
Cleavage and Fracture
- Punctuation
- After a period put 2 spaces
- Grammer

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Oreo
12/15/2011 10:46:04 am

To find more info go to Mr.Hong's slide show.

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Goda
12/15/2011 12:06:55 pm

6 identify clues:
- Grammar mistake. It is need be capitalized on first sentence.
- More Info for every section
- If you could find a picture and video for every section
- So far great job:):):):):):):)

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