Reflections for the "Rock Cycle" and "Theory of Plate Tectonics" Sections

12/12/2011

9 Comments

 
Hey viewers,
please post a comment or question that you have about the information in the science section of my website. If you notice that I have left out any information, please let me know. Your feed back is greatly appreciated.
-Cleopatra
9 Comments
Oreo
12/12/2011 05:29:32 am

Your website is great, very organized, you might want to add abit more info your not missing anything besides that your website is very good. :)

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Goddess Athena
12/12/2011 05:36:03 am

Your website is great! There are a few spelling errors and a few grammar errors in your rock cycle section. But overall well done!

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Cleopatra
12/12/2011 05:41:15 am

@Oreo and @Goddess Athena thank you every much. @Oreo which sections do I need to add more information to?

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Joe Joltz
12/12/2011 07:59:40 am

Plate Tectonics:

- I agree with everyone else your website has a very clean look to it.
- There are some very small grammatical errors on some pages that can easily be fixed. (Theory
- Remember to capitalize the worth "Earth".
- You could say what the seven large plates are.
- You could start your divergent boundary like "Divergent Boundaries are places where......." instead of starting with places.
- add a ' when you spell Earth's.
- Try to always use the same font size.
- Maybe you could show a picture of Tizo Wilson on your transform boundary page.
- Overall it's great! :)

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Joe Joltz
12/12/2011 08:03:12 am

Rock Cycle:

- Maybe you could add periods to the long sentence you currently have about how the rock cycle works.
- Great info I didn't see any other mistakes.

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Minnie Mouse
12/12/2011 09:55:23 am

there were a few speling mistakes so i think that you should edit and stuff like that

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Amy
12/12/2011 01:14:46 pm

This website is fantastic!!!!!! There is so much information on the rock cycle and the theory of plate tectonics. The pictures are very relevant to the information. You have done a wonderful job on your website. Keep up the great work also have fun well making your website.

-Amy

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Goda
12/12/2011 01:44:49 pm

I think your website is great and has a lot of info and I like your intro for home page. But I think you could make your writing bit smaller. I think you could just make one nice neat biblography. Great Job:)!!

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Minnie Mouse
1/4/2012 02:04:46 pm

grammar : i couldent find any thing that stands out in grammar (couldent find any grammar mistakes )

information: your information is very clean and keep it up

capitals : i could only find one capital for the word EARTH that should be capitalized no madder what

punctuation : your puncutation is very good

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